Hey guys, first off I just want to say I'm back on the forum after being inactive for a while. Anyway, I just put out a new song, and I'd be gracious if you guys would check it out for me. Most of the people that have heard it think it is my best song, I know I still have a lot to work on. After y'all check it out, feel free to give me some tips on how I could get better.

SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/jayfarr/time-a-tell
YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eTj01QZ2Z3A

Also, I remixed a cashis song from "The Art of Dying" album, the song was called "Roll Up", and I did a freeverse over it called "M-80" over it. You can find that below

SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/jayfarr/m-80-...s-prod-centric
YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pwJROm5ghDA

All criticism is appreciated