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    Everything I Say


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    Eedee
    EVERYTHING I SAY
    (Prod. by Pyth Wonder)

    [Verse 1]
    What if I died right now...?
    And I never left this state again?
    What if it's like I'm proud?
    Maybe then I could just focus on settling this crazy shit
    I need to think outside the box,
    Cause now I unlock this fucking cage and with
    This opportunity? I won't miss again.
    Shit, go figure it out, since...

    Everything I say just links back to this
    See life there? Yeah - I think that's a bitch
    Sick tracks, so switch back, and this bastard kid
    Will never stop it, I'd rather shrink wrap my dick
    I'm mean when I say that I say what I mean
    I keep everyday marked, because I'm chasin' a dream
    Damn, ain't it a bitch?
    The album cover should be my face when I'm takin' a shit
    And I'm makin' it big...

    [Interlude 1]
    Walking on the beach with the sand under my feet
    Makes realize how weak I really am
    Every week that goes by I lose a bit of myself
    I sit and I yell but no one hears my voice
    Black and white, black and white
    Turn till it clicks if you fear the noise
    Satellite, satellite,
    I can see them move when I star-gaze

    [Verse 2]
    I'm barely fused, cause anything you say or do
    Could case me to flip, I refuse to raise this roof
    Did they cage you too
    And threw you away?
    Can't look you in the face, can't do what it takes
    To strike you as someone who has it together
    I've been damaged forever so how do I manage my health cause
    I've damned it to hell and it's resulted in this...
    It's more worth it if it's worth it for less...

    My best is something I haven't peaked at yet,
    Haven't checked at all to see if I reached that debt
    You can beat back anything if you're trying your hardest
    Or least I was told, fuck, they just lied from the start of
    My life, you know what? Maybe I'll empty a clip
    Into a side of a building if you tempt me to flip
    And if you get me to give a shit, nice job
    I've come to write songs that'll bite off space and stop time

    [Interlude 2]
    It's a small world they say
    But when I drive five miles to work
    Compared to the seven thousand, nine hundred and eighteen
    Mile diameter of the earth
    I find myself gawking at the fact
    That we are small compared to the
    Eight hundred, sixty four thousand three hundred and twenty seven
    Mile diameter of the sun
    Light takes eight minutes to get here
    Five minutes to get to work
    Don't even get me started on the Milky Way

    [Verse 3]
    I wish I hadn't seen others on magazine covers...
    Makes me glad I didn't have an absentee mother
    Or a father who fucking hated me,
    I was raised completely clean, now I sit here chasin' dreams
    It relaxes the side of me which is constantly stressed
    I have these songs in my head I can't make
    Cause problems develop and monsters are let out
    And fire and water eject from the top of the end of the world

    Nod if it's yes, that it's a cause and effect
    But the repercussions coming haven't bothered me yet
    Apocalypses eclipse our species
    But we're already dead, I just pretend to breathe in
    Working a job that saps all my time
    I think that's my cue card to black ball my life
    Shake the magic 8-ball but don't read it
    I hope the seasons change and I hope that people see it

    [Interlude 3]
    I don't need to have watched Game of Thrones
    To know that winter is coming
    Like, holy shit, it's Alaska,
    So I gotta enjoy the two months of 80 degree fuck weather
    And prepare my anus for the below freezing conditions
    It's easy to miss it, but this life is quick
    This life's a bitch
    But I heard petting it lowers your blood pressure

    [Verse 4]
    It all contradicts the persona I give
    I would've acted different had I saw what I missed
    It's not the build up that killed us,
    It's the let-down, I need to hang it up like Robin Williams
    Smooth move, way to go, texts like "too soon"
    A legend is dead, I just say it for the tunes, dude
    I look at the clock and realize I'm cuckoo

    You won me over, but to lose you
    Is the nail in my coffin, but it's over, you dig it?
    But only they didn't -
    And when the game is on the line, I'm just a Kobe game winner
    So we ain't missin' out on all this fun stuff
    You told me wait in this and my moment'll come
    And I know it's the one chance I'll ever get
    To knowin' my limitations,
    White Noise - I hope you anticipate it

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    Here's the link for anyone who can't see the Soundcloud embed.

    https://soundcloud.com/eedeemusic/everything-i-say-prod-by-pyth-wonder

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    That is such a dope song man! Right away the beat gave me good vibes and then your lyrics took me away. Do you have any tracks similar to this I can listen to?

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    DUDE.. Who made the beat? Anyways, that song was really dope, and deep lyircs. I loved this line

    The album cover should be my face when I'm takin' a shit
    And I'm makin' it big...
    Favorite line.. One thing.. For the chorus I wish you had sung it..

    Anyways, overal I'd give it a 4.5 out 5 instead of a 5 just cause of chorus part.. But seriously dude.. You have a talent, and don't give up.

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    Quote Originally Posted by lludawg View Post
    That is such a dope song man! Right away the beat gave me good vibes and then your lyrics took me away. Do you have any tracks similar to this I can listen to?
    Not really, to be honest. This is a new sound for me, IMO. The best I can do is direct you to my last album back in March: http://forums.cashisonline.com/showt...res-quot-Album

    Or my last mixtape back in June: http://forums.cashisonline.com/showt...-%28Mixtape%29

    @HomieOC - Pyth Wonder made it lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by Eedee View Post
    Not really, to be honest. This is a new sound for me, IMO. The best I can do is direct you to my last album back in March: http://forums.cashisonline.com/showt...res-quot-Album

    Or my last mixtape back in June: http://forums.cashisonline.com/showt...-%28Mixtape%29

    @HomieOC - Pyth Wonder made it lol
    Oh.. wow. BTW for the user tagging to work you have to tag me all the way at the top of the page of the thread you will see it.. Also type @HomieOC with no space.. u typed @ Homie But doing that.. just links the username to my profile page.

    lol

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    This is awesome dude. The piano melody really draws me in, great writing too.

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    I liked the melody, the lyrics a little. Generally vote for it and approve it. Hope that you do not stop, improving every day. luck

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    Wow I like it, its awesone. I like the beat and the piano in the melody, the lyrics aren't bad also. Good job.

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    This song has a nice twisted poetical with a storytelling feel to it. I like the creativity aspect of this. I listened to this in my studio on studio monitors and the only I would recommend is bringing the music up just a tad bit to equalize with optimum level of your vocals. Keep it my man. Overall, nice mix and cool expression.

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    Awesome job man! Waiting for more!

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    Great song, I would love to see a live performance with a full band, which would be awesome. You are a great talent, thanks for sharing.

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    Good sample, good beat, good lyrics. I like the eerie singing in the background, it really helps the song to have an ethereal quality to it. My only complaint is that your voice doesn't quite match the mood of the song. But maybe that's just me. I think it's really good.

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    Meh. its "ok" not really my cup of tea though, I wouldn't change the radio if I heard it, but i wouldn't go out and buy the CD either...

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    Great song dude! Thanking for posting lyrics, I really like them. Also love the beat.
    Keep doing what your doing, son! For real.

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    Really feeling that beat man!
    Good song but going to have to agree with the above about your tone, other then great work!

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