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    Junior Member Lil' Homie
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    I'm a young rapper from Australia, this is my latest release.


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    Yo,

    This is a song myself & a good friend of mine collaborated on - he's a singer/guitarist/producer.
    I'm a rapper/songwriter.
    Any feedback or general thoughts are appreciated a lot.
    If you dig it you can download it for FREE.
    https://www.triplejunearthed.com/art...wer-vijilantee

    Give it a listen & tell me what you think.

    Thanks.

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    Dope dude..

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    Junior Member Lil' Homie
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    Word.
    Thanks man.
    Anything you'd like to see me improve on?

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    Not that i can think of, and i'm not a producer so i can't really critique.

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    This is banging, I really love it but keep in mind that you always need to improve. Never stand stood and do nothing, you need to have a motivation in mind so you can keep it better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by martindrox View Post
    This is banging, I really love it but keep in mind that you always need to improve. Never stand stood and do nothing, you need to have a motivation in mind so you can keep it better.
    Hell yeah, glad you like it homie.
    Cool advice too, music is definitely something I want to keep getting better & better at making.

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    This is cool, but your delivery is a bit iffy. Your voice reminds me of N'fa from 1200 Techniques.
    Laying in the Cut.

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    Wow. Well done man, I really like the beat, it's different from a lot of the things I've heard recently.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jasonking View Post
    This is cool, but your delivery is a bit iffy. Your voice reminds me of that guy from 1200 Techniques N'fa.
    Ha, really? Interesting comparison.
    When you say 'iffy', could you elaborate? Like, how do you think I could improve it?
    Thanks for checking it out (Y)

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    Quote Originally Posted by bootymaimed View Post
    Wow. Well done man, I really like the beat, it's different from a lot of the things I've heard recently.
    Wicked.
    Appreciate you giving it a suss, man.
    I'll pass the comment about the beat onto my mate

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    I already fed this, but I'm just gonna say that you need to put more energy into your delivery, like, vary your voice more. Listen to a Nas song and try to copy the way he raps, then change it up to your own unique sound.

    God bless.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mdemaz View Post
    I already fed this, but I'm just gonna say that you need to put more energy into your delivery, like, vary your voice more. Listen to a Nas song and try to copy the way he raps, then change it up to your own unique sound.

    God bless.
    True enough.
    I really want to make aggressive music, I'm just looking for beats ya know?

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